Analysis of prelim clip

I have learnt a lot from our prelim clip. Overall i dont think that our clip was to good we made a few basic mistakes, but me and the group have learnt from those mistakes.

First mistake i noticed was right at the beginning of our clip, the shot was blurry we needed to adjust the camera to  clearer shot. Our match cut of the hand was pretty good it went in well with the clip. After we had a change in camera shot from behind to front, the mistake we made there was that kavita was in the shot from behind at the door but she wasnt there in the shot from the front. The noise in the background was of students in our college since we filmed it in their, we couldnt edit that out without editing the dialogue of the characters. 

When kavita and i sat down, the next shot was kavita standing up pouring a cup of drink. The two shots didnt go together, the shots were to jumpy. We also placed the chairs near the window wear there was too much light and the characters looked like shadows. The next match cut of the dropped cup didnt really fit in with the clip it wasnt timed to well. Also with the conversation between me and kav we could have got a reverse shot of the conversation and that also would have helped with the lighting situation. Finally there was another jump cut of kavita sitting down and then laying on the floor again didnt go to well in the clip. 

Me and the group however learn  lot from this.